OH SPRING FEVER !

This one is for the Spring Fever Senryu contest....... However please note that basically it is a Haiku as it is related to nature

Restless the Heart is ,

Mind, Twitchy and Jumpy too;

Tell, Spring ! What to do !

Author's Note

My first Haiku. So don't know how is it.

Reviews

[K. Mascis]

Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.

Keep it up, and have a good spring!

[MilanRealWorld]

SPRING! Welcome with this lovely senryu

[K@lp@n@]

beautiful senryu

[Rochser]

never wrote a senryu. loved yours

[hello]

nice. liked it

[Janice]

I truly enjoyed the read. Little words which are largely descriptive. So, what do you do until Spring you ask? Why, you keep on writing! ;)

[Amy Bumpas]

This is great, I loved it. To me it says we are restless being
cooped up all winter, and Spring can't get here fast
enough. This was really cute, keep up the good work:).

[Faheem Akhter]

nice

[James Paulin]

I know how it is. You convey a feverish excitement contagiously. It doesn't even need the pics.