OH SPRING FEVER !
A Poem by
Prateeksha Khot
This one is for the Spring Fever Senryu contest....... However please note that basically it is a Haiku as it is related to nature
Restless the Heart is , Mind, Twitchy and Jumpy too; Tell, Spring ! What to do !
© 2010 Prateeksha Khot
Author's Note
My first Haiku. So don't know how is it.
Featured Review
Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.
Keep it up, and have a good spring!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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what an innovative way to welcome the spring season !!
Posted 14 Years Ago
what an innovative way to welcome the spring season !!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good pictures. Haiku was good.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Good pictures. Haiku was good.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a haiku. Senryu's focus on humanity or human nature.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a haiku. Senryu's focus on humanity or human nature.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
that was great. congrats on winning
Posted 14 Years Ago
that was great. congrats on winning
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is so wonderful and stunning.
I love this write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is so wonderful and stunning.
I love this write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great use of the Senryu form. Congrats to you!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great use of the Senryu form. Congrats to you!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
it flows nicely i enjoyed it but didnt catch much meaning or emotion but so few words so its harder for the reader so what is the pattern for a Senryu
Posted 14 Years Ago
it flows nicely i enjoyed it but didnt catch much meaning or emotion but so few words so its harder for the reader so what is the pattern for a Senryu
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.
Keep it up, and have a good spring!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.
Keep it up, and have a good spring!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It is always more difficult to convey using lesser number of words. Great work.
Posted 14 Years Ago
It is always more difficult to convey using lesser number of words. Great work.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Prateeksha Khot Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
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A happy-go-lucky rebel, i like doing things my way : that is the different way. I am creative and like trying out new stuff : There's hardly anything in which I am not interested. Plus point ? : I HAV..
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