OH SPRING FEVER !

This one is for the Spring Fever Senryu contest....... However please note that basically it is a Haiku as it is related to nature

Restless the Heart is ,

Mind, Twitchy and Jumpy too;

Tell, Spring ! What to do !

Author's Note

My first Haiku. So don't know how is it.

Reviews

[K. Mascis]

Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.

Keep it up, and have a good spring!

[the_stoic]

what an innovative way to welcome the spring season !!

[Not A Writer]

Good pictures. Haiku was good.

[Nameless]

This is a haiku. Senryu's focus on humanity or human nature.

[hello1]

that was great. congrats on winning

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and stunning.
I love this write.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great use of the Senryu form. Congrats to you!

[Hippy]

it flows nicely i enjoyed it but didnt catch much meaning or emotion but so few words so its harder for the reader so what is the pattern for a Senryu

[fernwort]

It is always more difficult to convey using lesser number of words. Great work.

[dont_know_me]

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!