HOPE

HOPE is a short poem which tells us to never lose faith whatsoever because god always has something planned for us.

When dreams are shattered,

When you feel all is lost,

Don't feel dejected,

Don't lose hope at any cost.

Life is not a bed of roses,

It has its ups and downs.

We should learn to accept failures,

And not meet them with frowns.

So what if you have not achieved,

What was to be your aim.

There is no need to feel sorry,

There is no need to feel shame.

Man writes his own destiny,

So don't lose hope as yet.

Come on! Buckle up and work harder,

Dont sit there and fret.

If things don't turn out the way you want,

Don't let that spoil your mood,

Because you must remember one thing :

WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD!

Author's Note

do you agree with this view? How many of you have actually come across such a situation?

Reviews

[Hope]

I agree with you completely! The cliche that I've always heard and sadly used myself was "life will never be easy," it speaks for itself. Now on the structure of it, you had a great rhyme scheme of ABCB and then in the last stanza I understand that the content of it was still very poetic and expressive of your emotions. It seems that you knew just what you wanted to say in that last stanza and were excited to write it down; if so, I would advise to write down what first comes to mind and then later go back and try to keep it with the same rhyme scheme. Otherwise, it was a very convincing poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

[nemesis]

wow really inspiring....really impressed by your writing!!!

[Sofea]

WOAH! INSPIRING! HAHA. Good job! :D

[Cricket Kidd]

Love it!

[CompellingComposer]

This is very good! :)

[VIK]

a really nice 1 thr..... yes i hv been through such situations and u r damn rght in sayin " man writes his own destiny".... dam rght v do.....

[kelly]

Me definitely. I liked this and it made me feel a lot better. I like the way you write.

[Ang]

So uplifting! I love the positivity of this piece and the encouragment you give people. Don't have anything bad to say :) This piece was great! :)

[Adelia Alighieri]

Very nice, it's brimming with hope, optimism and strength. Easy, thoughtful and lyrical. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very positive poem. You are correct. We must hold on to hope and allow the lessons of life to teach us to be better. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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from one Taurus to another-
this is a true and lovely poem:)