HOPE

HOPE is a short poem which tells us to never lose faith whatsoever because god always has something planned for us.

When dreams are shattered,

When you feel all is lost,

Don't feel dejected,

Don't lose hope at any cost.

Life is not a bed of roses,

It has its ups and downs.

We should learn to accept failures,

And not meet them with frowns.

So what if you have not achieved,

What was to be your aim.

There is no need to feel sorry,

There is no need to feel shame.

Man writes his own destiny,

So don't lose hope as yet.

Come on! Buckle up and work harder,

Dont sit there and fret.

If things don't turn out the way you want,

Don't let that spoil your mood,

Because you must remember one thing :

WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD!

Author's Note

do you agree with this view? How many of you have actually come across such a situation?

Reviews

[Hope]

I agree with you completely! The cliche that I've always heard and sadly used myself was "life will never be easy," it speaks for itself. Now on the structure of it, you had a great rhyme scheme of ABCB and then in the last stanza I understand that the content of it was still very poetic and expressive of your emotions. It seems that you knew just what you wanted to say in that last stanza and were excited to write it down; if so, I would advise to write down what first comes to mind and then later go back and try to keep it with the same rhyme scheme. Otherwise, it was a very convincing poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

[dark brown i's]

A really nice poem about hope. it is very true what you wrote in the poem I would like to read more of your work. Nice piece!

[Leslie Philibert]

At last ! A poem to cheer you up and not full up of doom and gloom. Simply a nice
traditional piece of writing to improve your day. It needs ( perhaps) a bit of work,
some of the scanning is a bit dodgy.Like it ! Good work !

[Mary C]

this is a beautiful poem

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Lovely flow and rhyme , and nice and positive :)

[daydreamer]

yes very true.nice inspiring poem. good write:)

[Diva]

beautiful

I liked the happy truthful vibe to it, we need to be strong and not give up. It's a good message and I enjoed checking it out. It was a sweet poem to read, other than a sad one!

[Lorraine]

I agree of course, and I think pretty much everyone has encountered a dire situation where the only light is hope. Your poem is truly inspiring and very much true. It has a nice and steady flow that's easy to follow.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Scisenheart]

I have felt like all hope is lost but it never is, if it was there would be no one here, no point in exsistance, nothing at all. very poetic and insaparational.
Scisenheart :D xx

[J. Lynn]

I love this poem! It's is very true. I like how you ended it, "WHAT EVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD". Some people don't think that, and think that it happens just to ruin their lives! Great work! Keep up the amazing writing!