Dual Subjectivity

Dual Subjectivity

A Poem by Pranali


In a reverie
I find imprints of you
Thoughts not my own
Just an inherited mystery

You are the veil over my outlook
My reality is the distorted version of two
Excess empathy and vigilance lost
Effect imparted is thus "You!

Nothing original remains
Unconscious plagiarism is at its wake
Am I abnormal or fake?
Will your imprints forever remain?

© 2010 Pranali


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I like the way your mind works...there are some original words you have used like
Unconscious plagiarism is at its wake...i really like that...i think you have an unique style of writing and you should keep writing...

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Pranali
Pranali

Aurangabad, Maharashtra, India



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I am Pranali. Born on 17th june 1994. I like to write poetry and think a lot. other than poetry my greatest passion is psychology. more..

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