A Boy’s Love story

During the wet rainy days

God tried to unite us in many ways

He finally succeeded when you asked me a question

so accordingly for you there arose an emotion

 

Before one year

far were our hearts though benches near

But today  our hearts are so near

that  it feels as if we are inside same wear

 

Her beauty is so divine

that has stolen the heart which was mine

Only she is the subject of my  dreams

and now my heart beats only on her name it seems

 

Her smiles are springs' blooms

and her cries are winters' glooms

In front of only her I act like a dumb

and her touches make me numb

 

She is a princess and also a star

who is residing very far

but still I love her so much

and  to me she is an angel glorified by artistic touch

Reviews

[Abby]

it narrates a nice story but sounds like you have to work more on word choice.

[pippa]

thank you so much