the midnight dream

unrealistic dreams always come along with heartbreaks!

In the eerie silence of  midnight
the moments spent with you plays itself in my mind
my heart mourns for you
calls you for the work due

I had spent the whole last night awake
recalling the promises you made
the silver moon that we enjoyed
the lovely cottages that were lain.

Feeding my pillow tiny tears of painful separation
hoping from you a reconciliation
Those beautiful days 
were just a memory in haze.

The lights go out
I hear a key turn in a lock
outside my balcony
I see you stand two feet apart.

Every single midnight
the dream is same
the thought that you will come back
is really insane.

Reviews

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

feeding my pillow tiny tears of painful separation ...
awsm line nd full poetry is very nice

[prajakta]

thanks for the review..:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome g

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful........
full of emotions and passion.......
very well written....
i loved it!!!
:)

[prajakta]

thankyou...:).keep reviewing!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sure!!! you are welcome!!! :) :)

[RiverRei]

First off, these are just my opinions and suggestions for edit, you don't have to do them..
Midnight to me is a time, so it doesn't make sense to me to say "the midnight"...Besides that, I really enjoyed reading this. I think a lot of people can relate to the feeling behind this as well which just makes it more enticing to read. Great work!

[prajakta]

thankyou Riverei :) and ya i respect ur suggestions i wud surely edit it:).please keep reviewing..

[RiverRei]

That flows so much better to me :) Thank you for being understanding and encouraging me to keep reviewing :)

[prajakta]

My pleasure....:)