She

She
woke up in a room having similar people
but vowed to stand out like a steeple.
walked into a room of similar uniforms
but vowed to break the norm.
got admitted into a cluster of similar minds
but vowed to be crazy not confined.
entered a path chosen by everyone
but vowed to walk in accordance to none.
was swept under the wings of death as every dame
but vowed to continue living through her name.
lived her life like every mortal
but loved it and did not let it go throttled!

Reviews

[E G TEN]

To be crazy not confined" that's me;) strong powerful words and finely constructed as well
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem! ;)

[prajakta]

thanks for stopping by..:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

it was very very nice di !!

[prajakta]

thankyou.glad dat u liked it..:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome g

[Velour6]

It has a great feeling of empowerment if someone were to put themselves in place of the anonymous "she". And even just putting the exclamation point at the end kind of summed up the whole feeling of it, very well written.

[prajakta]

Thank You so much..glad dat u liked it..:)

[Isabel25]

Very powerful and female oriented. I like it. Has a strong sense of determination about it. It displays a lot of strength. On second thought, loved it :D

[prajakta]

thanks for stopping by..:),please keep reviewing..

[Isabel25]

I will....:)

[Shubham Joshi]

she tries and tries and tries
difficulties come and stop by
and yet she tries and she stands tall
and a poem just above all

[prajakta]

thankyou shubham..:)

[Abilash Uttama]

like hitler said 'If you don’t like a rule… Just follow it… Reach the top… And change the rule'. every line is motivational, loved reading it :)

[prajakta]

Thankyou abhilash..glad dat you liked it..:)