What goes on?

Beatings and bruises
Blood and tears
Cries of mercy and sins of crores
Who knows what goes behind closed doors?

Emotional agony
Indomitable pain
Facile smiles suppressing consternating strain
Who knows what goes on behind closed brains?

Preposterous mirages
Morbid whims
Singular craving for sordid thoughts
Who knows what goes on behind closed hearts?

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Miss P, you had stated 3 of the most private sector's
Of which people had failed to open up from time to time. Such
A bold and beautiful statement, Thanks for sharing always :)

[prajakta]

thankyou so much.ur review means a lot:-)

[Ayank Chourasia]

My review wont mean much as m new..the message here is strong and it is directed right at the source hope the whole world could know what happens behind close heart door and brains so the level of inhumane activities can drop down levels be sane! awesome i loved it

[prajakta]

ur review is much appreciated:-)thankyou so much!

[R Smith]

social comment right to the heart of the matter but behind those closed doors, brains and hearts we don't have a chance, they will never let us in, sad but exceptional poetry Prajakta, your work is always very good, thank you :)

[prajakta]

thankyou sir:-)

[Isabel25]

Noone knows..but maybe it is better that we don't know everything, it would just drive us crazy. Good one. Realistic and sharp.

[prajakta]

Thank You....

[Abilash Uttama]

An impactful poem with nice flow, liked it :)

[prajakta]

thankyou...:)

[Prashant Pandey]

a hit of question-mark on brain. suprb flow with nice words. liked it :-)

[prajakta]

thankyou...:)

[Death's Poet]

Wow. This is so powerful and so very sad. Definitely made me feel something and this is so true. Great poem

[prajakta]

thanks for stopping by...:)

[BlueDreams]

Just Beautiful :) :)
Nice use of words to portray the scene.. :)

[prajakta]

thankyou ..:)