Only If I were the One

If I were the one,
I would pick up my phone
& call you while you were all alone.
Listen to what you had to say
About your day
Hear you laugh,
which would make a fractured night
Twinkle with stars and shine bright.
Hear about your grievances to complaints
& provide you comfort to make it sane.
Would've closed my eyes and felt you near
Hear you breathe heavy
Whenever I went naughty.

Feel the love of your rebuke
Feel the rage and sarcasm hidden beneath your words which you occasionally shoot

Honey, I too would have told you about my day
As there is so much to say
Would have bestowed my LOVE upon you
Before we could embark on a magical journey,
Which I had prepared for you.

Only If I were the one.

Reviews

[Ency Bearis]

Good write with the compassion.

[Deepankar]

Thank You very much.........

[Prritiy]

a sweet write, though sad one too, written with feelings full of love and care. liked it.

[Deepankar]

ya sad indeed :)... Thanks anyways

[Prritiy]

you are welcome

[gabrielle]

This is a sweet write. i like how this piece spoke of the seemingly trivial matters, that is, sharing how was the day for each other, but proved to be very important in sustaining a good relationship. too bad, he's not the one. nicely penned!

[Deepankar]

Thank you very much for the review :)

[autumn]

nice written. :))

[Deepankar]

thanks

[autumn]

your welcome. :)

[chaotic katie]

awe! i loved the compassion and longing in this piece, very emotional. Beautifully written.

[Deepankar]

Thank you very much....