You've Heard of Eyes That Kill...

 

You’ve Heard of Eyes That Kill…

No, they don’t seem

supple enough.

They need to be

soft yet bossy,

curved but

honey-don’t-you-mess-with-me

sharp.

 

Oh yes.

 

They’ve got to be

that perfect shade of

velvet heather

and

juicy pomegranate.

That’s it,

one more coat

and a little gloss

just there.

They've gotta catch

his eye make him look twice,

make him wonder about things.

Dangerous Things.

 

Reviews

[R.J. Seoul]

I love this poem - purely because it perfectly encapsulates the constant questioning and doubt you feel about yourself just as your about to speak to someone you like. Not gonna lie - pretty brilliant Prachi.

[meagansphilosophy]

I adore this!
Its so seductive, I love it. aha.
It seems like your creating the perfect stare to linger in a man you have interests in. Its amazing.

Keep writing, your really talented!

(:

[GenMuffin7]

so totally prachi

and i got it, i really did :D