Empty Heart (o my love)

A Poem by Prabhat Mishra

Presenting you all a painful tale of love..Empty Heart.Straight from my heQ

Empty heart (O my Love!)
I remember the bright summer day,
When u walked up to me;
In your pink and grey dress,
And sat beside me on the marble couch!
I looked up ur glowing face nd ur locks of hair,
Still cant forget O my love! my dear love! (1)

I remember ur first touch nd warmth of ur hands,
The moment u embraced me
It felt like paradise;
The first walk wid u; holding ur sweaty hands,
And ur innocent smile; ur childish talks!
U made me feel special nd my first love!
Still cant forget O my love! My dear love! (2)

I remember ur letters filled with true love,
Dat love card with ur heart in it;
The moment u kissed my cheeks nd u blushed,
When u laid in my arms nd cuddled me like a baby!
You made me feel true meaning of love,
Still cant forget o my love! My dear love! (3)

You showered me with ur love nd care,
While i hurted you; made you cry,
Still you held on me; still u loved me crazily,
Which I never respected truly;
For i was confused nd selfish.
I remember u cried nd in deep pain,
When i broke up wid u!
Still cant forget u O my love! My dear love! (4)

I may have moved on but I know u still love me!
I have all d pleasures now but still hv an Empty Heart.
My heart belonged to u but i failed to love you;
I know u cant be mine; for i gave u immense pain!
I broke ur heart and shattered u;
And so my heart remains empty forever!
Never forget u O my love! My sweet love! (5)
By-Prabhat C Mishra (humblepie)
12/4/2013; 14:08

© 2013 Prabhat Mishra

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Trigorin

Check your spelling and grammar. You have a good story and there's something touching in the sort of antiquated, reverent tone you've taken in this, but that's ruined somewhat by all the usage of 'u' for 'you' and things like that. Makes it difficult to take seriously. Fix that and you'll have a much better piece.