I Did As They Said.

No one ever accept any suggestion until they find it apt.

I heard people talk often.
I did that because they said so.
Don't know why such things happen.
He did it as he's their subordinate
or else acts like that, may be.

Though he condemns them.
Blaming and bitter words spit out.
He dint figure out the problem.
The loss of time and failure.
Furious mind gets frustrated.

They deserve to be blamed.
A free suggestion has no value.
Although it is asked by him.
Does he not have brain to think?
Ofcourse he has like everyone.

It gets blockage for a little while.
He needs them to guide him.
Still the problem be small or silly.
Blame, shows his weakness of thinking.
Don't say ever "I did, as they said."

Author's Note

I heard people said this often. I hate that bitterly. They ask for help when they have their mind blocked.
There is only two way to solve it either they need to clear their mind first or to stop blaming someone who tried to help you.

Reviews

[Leigh]

I like your statemented / running dialog style, you have made some good points in this poems three verses. I think of this as 'The world knows your name, but the world won't listen'. I much enjoyed reading this, thank you for posting.

[Prabha Salimath]

thank so much for the review.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

This is the best one I have read so far. You try to hide your emotions and create your own blend of literature. You can write excellent satire.

[Prabha Salimath]

I do like hide my emotions but not in this piece ti say.
I really exhausted of listening this when people talk infront of me such things I feel like they observing my energy, but I can't get rid of because they are my friends I need to listen them..

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

A sense of social duty... when clashed with common sense makes for brilliant literature.

[Prabha Salimath]

yes ofcourse I do feel literature is a mild weapon to fight such social calamity.