Solitude.

The time we can be all ourself.

It bit me.
Don't know when?
It built a castle and
and asks me,
"BE MY MAJESTY"
Everyday it haunts me.
There are demon rules.
All of pure evil.
A spell bound, it's like.
Wanna know what is it?
I, yes it is 'I'.
what said al about.

It made me brute.
Get in fight for me,
with crowd and beloved.
Goodness disappeared.
Chanting of I in me.
So mean and rude.
It's eating me inside.
Can't spare it anymore.
Fend for myself of it.
Battling it, in solitude.
It's harder than breathing.
I win over it part by part.

Author's Note

Starting everything 'I' is not good I feel.
Thinking about it is good but don't nurse it to get into an evil thing.
When someone bit by 'I' they become blind to everything.

Reviews

[anne]

very nice...beautiful description.....:))

[Prabha Salimath]

thank you dear.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Prabha is feminine for Prabhu? No woman ever 'committed' a virtue without her bosom full of guilt and doubt or sinned with an ounce of honest guilt lingering within.

Wonderful stuff. Read a little quality poetry and prose... you will get even better at expressing yourself.

[Prabha Salimath]

Prabha means light and Prabhu means God or else guru or raja depending upon people.

Thank you so much for the review. It looks like your analyzing my works throughly thanks.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Reading this poem suddenly reminds me one of my poem which I will share later,
I can relate this to myself to some extent,
nice poem prabha

[Prabha Salimath]

thanks Hardeep. I'm glad it reminds your one of poems.