Hallucination.

Unnecessary fear takes courage and confidence.

The fear is born in me.
Neither I'm nourishing it
nor fearing it again.
I feared for once.
It's taking my life energy,
courage and confidence too.
Whether its playing with me?
or I'm dancing to it's rhythm!
If eyes open I see dark,
If closed terrible images.
Sometimes I think these,
are children of hallucination.

Author's Note

Fear happens in everyone's life clear it once don't let it haunt you.

Reviews

[mou]

I too feel that fear born for things that are really important to us and sometime it also gives us immense pleasure after the achievement of desired object..but nothing is good in an abandon..a very unique and creative write ..Like it

[Prabha Salimath]

Thank you so much for the review my dear friend....

[mou]

you are welcome friend

[Saddam]

Fearing, hallucinate. Good write.

[Prabha Salimath]

Both are two faces of coin bcoz fear only gives birth to hallucination. Thanks for the review SSADD.

[Skai Rain]

Don't forget the images you see just staring into the dark! *shivers*
Great work.

[Prabha Salimath]

Thank you so much for the review Brit.

[hardeep sabharwal]

As for as I feel, fears are part of life, and born out of curiosity of doing something new, what we have to do is just be strong and overcome these fears
A nice read here

[Prabha Salimath]

Thank you Hardeep for an insightful review.

[Ankit Mahar]

I guessed that you missed out a few words to give the write the feel of a poem. Like where you wrote
"The fear is born me." instead of "The fear is born in me" or something else.
But it's my personal opinion that the if you had written the poem in a simpler way, then it would have been better. Because then the reader would go with the flow instead of thinking about 'which word is missing here.'
Leaving that, the message that you sent through the poem was great. Yes, everyone has something in their life that they fear.
I like your poem, but -I think- that it could have been better.
Anyway. Thanks for sharing. Feel free to ask me for reviews.
Keep writing :-)

[Prabha Salimath]

Thanks Ankit for the review and while I writting on paper I wrote as you said its a typo mistake I'll make it correct.