Arise In Me Your Passions (Adult)

Undress me, turn me naked
Let me melt in your arms today,
Every desire within, be truly sated,
Make me lose in this game we play.

Let the darkness of the night,
Be ablaze with our passions,
Enduring be this fight,
Wearing down chaste bastions.

Let the steam of our ardour
Run rivulets over leathery lands,
Journey into a roaring flame, together,
As we succumb to our mortal demands.

Let every quarter be given,
Nothing held back in shame,
No fancy to be shun,
Wantonness, know no tame.

Fashion desire from my clay,
Extend me no courtesy,
Turn into each other's prey,
And let us scream in ecstasy,

Break my pieces into whole,
And consume me coarsely,
Ravish me body and soul,
And I shall possess you truly.

Author's Note

First attempt at erotic poetry. Always avoided it in the past, wasn't sure about mixing poetry & eroticism together. But this image really captured the imagination & provided a challenge. And so decided to give it a shot in the hope to write on the subject with the requisite ardour without being licentious. Hope it is a good attempt.

Reviews

[ron]

Wow. This was erotic, passion, desire burning deep within your words.
Very well done.

[Poetic Nuance]

Thank you for your comments. Really appreciate it. :)

[ron]

You are most welcome :)