Paused

Walking through the woods

You see the look upon my face

 

I could see how shocked you are

You see how sad my eyes are

 

Life passes me by

As I stand motionless

 

You walk towards me

Making a sudden breeze

 

You touch me but I just fade with the wind

You try to grab hold of me

 

You run after me for days

You run for weeks

 

You stop running

I saw you collapse

 

You laid there motionless

Guess now, we're both still and lifeless

 

Your soul flys to me

I stay yet again motionless

 

Your soul touches my cheek

I just look at you

 

My arms cross

I fade away with the wind

 

I have kept life in pause

Starting now as I fade into the light  

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Real unique. Great work. (:

[Courtland Sky]

I loved it. Even though it as very sad it was also very amazing. I hope that you continue writing things like this. You are definitely one of my new inspiritations.

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice to have a pause button. The poem had a tone of deep sadness. Waiting for a last word to fade into the wind. A sad and beautiful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Misty Blue Eyes]

wow i dont know if its the music im listening to or what but this poem made me cry, its a great one great work hun

[Short.Nerd]

Nice job, I love the flow of this. Keep up the good work.