do you love me?

do you love me?

A Poem by rihanna

do you love me? when you say it there is some kinda loook in your eye ? its like your hideing something 
is there some one else ? i need to know ! its killing me i need to know !

© 2012 rihanna


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rihanna
im not good at it but i like to do it for something to do i came on this site to improve my writeing skills so people help me ?

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Write from your spirit and not from your feeling sometime the heart can betray, be your self and let the words flow from out you where God live
Let him write out you, to be the best of the best there only one you

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my advice is to keep reading. writing is like a muscle you have to use it. but if your stuck. just keep reading :) that should help

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have to start some where. It's not bad just would like to see a little more. Goodluck

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is ok...the more the better.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is good for a beginning. :)
maybe try adding more, and checking grammar/spelling/punctuation/etc. good luck!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rihanna

12 Years Ago

yeaaa !

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rihanna
rihanna

does it matter stalker.? :* , HI



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heey yall i'm rihanna i'm 17 (: i like to write. i am layed back i love to hang with my family and friends!(: my fav color is green. i like someone i cant have. eeehh life sucks .... if ya wanna .. more..


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