When I was little Curious and small Fairytales and adventures Were painted upon my wall My head stuffed with imagination I lived with no boundaries Delighted by new activities Amazed by a new inventions I was invisible and free Happy of simply being me
On a white canvas My paint brush created a new master piece I drew a magnificent sunrise Outlined by purple butterflies Inspired by the birds, the grass and the trees They gave me comfort in need I loved to lay on the grass To gaze at the clouds Say "hello" to the sun And feel the caress of the wind
I believed that I could fly in the blue Climb the highest mountains Hold the twinkling stars in embrace And see mother Earth from outer space Daydreaming of new world Where everything would be permitted I didn't have to pretend Naturewas my friend
I danced I skipped Round and round In the yard and all over again My dress twirling with the air But tears streamed down When I tripped and fell on the ground It was to ma'as despair I got freaked for a little while But a band aid wiped my mourning And maa's loving heart erased my pain So that I couldgo backand dance again
Once upon a time I wasreadat bedtime A kiss on my forehead Tired, I went to bed The princesses, fairies and pirates Followed me into slumberland While the bright moonlight And it's shiningfriends They sung of legends Protecting me while I dreamed From the monsters under my bed
I wanted to become everything From astronaut, superstar and detective To fisherman, artist andacrobat To be the best, how exciting! I knew that I was capable of doing But why are the grownups laughing? ''That's impossible'' they said ''You have way too much imagination'' they said
''Grow up and be good'' Could someone tell me why? And as I grew up with time I learned about the ''real world'' In this society of lies Full of hate, stress and crimes
Life seen by achild's mind is beautiful. Love felt by a genuine soul isunconditional. But now look at what we've become. Now, Earth is crying and our children, dying. We have to see further than our own eyes. Because this is the only way to survive. To start loving again with our hearts that
once were young...
This was a different approach to finding yourself that I wasn't expecting, but I think it worked really well. We do have such a magical perception of life when we are younger, and we get so jaded as we learn more about the world. I really liked how you ended it with the message that we should try to gain back some of our childhood innocence. I have always felt that the world would be better if we still thought more like children.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for commenting! Indeed, this is exactly the message I wanted to pass to everyone.
You just wrote this with all of your heart... No doubt! And.. I do agree with you whatever you`ve just sent to this world `bout living together with peace.. but sweety.. the world`s became very bad. It ain`t even hear what the God tells it. Anyway, what we all can do to keep it sane is ... living with peacefully as long as the heart`s living into the core of our body. Keep writing. I like even really felt this wonderful write written by your beautiful heart! ;)
This was a different approach to finding yourself that I wasn't expecting, but I think it worked really well. We do have such a magical perception of life when we are younger, and we get so jaded as we learn more about the world. I really liked how you ended it with the message that we should try to gain back some of our childhood innocence. I have always felt that the world would be better if we still thought more like children.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for commenting! Indeed, this is exactly the message I wanted to pass to everyone.
I am reminded of an amusement park ride that held so much joy and surprise when I was young, but now I only see the faded paint, worn out hinges, and dirty grease
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10 Years Ago
The way we see things changes a lot with time. Thanks for reviewing!
Hi!
I am 20 years old and I just rediscovered my writerscafe account.
It all started in my English class this year when my teacher asked the class to write a short descriptive writing. It could be.. more..