Shining star

I'll be your shining star
I'll lead you through the dark
When everything seems too hard
Don't feel scarred
I'll be right here waiting
Waiting for you, for you to give me your hand
Together we'll take a stand
And we'll be one, our lives will no longer be bland

Written on July 9th, 2011 *(7-9-11)*

Reviews

[David Michael]

I think I really like this! Much different from your others, so maybe that's the only reason - variety is always good. But I think it's the fact that it doesn't have such a blatant and fixed rhyme scheme, which I always like better. And unlike many of your poems, I think you succeeded in making this flow. There's a reason the other two felt a song in this - it's lyrical.

Good job indeed!

[Time.]

I agree with the comment below, It does sorta have a song rhyme to itt! love it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)
Like a small song....very nice.