I'll admit

I'll admit

A Poem by ErinLovesYou<3

All I want is someone who cares
Someone that doesn't think my weight is too much to bear

You don't like that you can't figure me out
Well that's what it's about

I don't want to put you through my s**t
That much I'll admit

The thing is, if you really care like you say you do
Then you won't let me go before this is through

This much I'll let you know
Before it starts to snow

I'm sorry for being a b***h
But don't worry, I'm not going to ditch

Written on June 26th, 2011 *(6/26/11)*

© 2011 ErinLovesYou<3


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I loved this! It expresses that you don't want the other person to leave but while you're going through stuff you don't want to drag them into it. This was amazing and very well written with so few words. Excellent job Erin. :)
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ErinLovesYou<3
ErinLovesYou<3

Norwich, CT



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