In my heart

In my heart there is a hole, through this hole you will find my soul

If you venture your way through my soul you  will determine that it is full of snow

Follow my steps through the snow, understand how much I have grown

After you left me on my own

 

When these steps of mine are washed away by many rainy days the leaves will begin to change

The ocean waves will succumb to their fate 

Your journey will meet its mate

All before it becomes too late

 

Written between January 19, 2011 & May 19, 2011 *(1-19-11)*/ *(5-19-11)*

Reviews

[A Taste Of Blood]

I liek. Especially the use of succumb. I thought seeing snow might ruin the flow, but i didnt realize where the story would go.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

The journey can be imagined very clearly...yes!
Your poems are seamlessly linked in thought and style to each other.
Its like seasons...or episodes.
Leaves one wondering when the next will come and how it will weave its way through.

[Time.]

I really like this one erin. it shows you, in a poem'd sense.

[Rose Tyler]

Love is cruel, but all wounds heal with time.