Falling away

Drown your words in music

Continue to lose it

When you feel it flow, just walk slow

Once it becomes a blur, ask me how it hurts

 

Climb inside my head, tell me if I'm dead

Look through my eyes, see how I'm outside

Walk into my heart, realize your still on Mars

Notice I'm a mess, I've even confessed

 

Written on August 21st, 2010 *(8-21-10)*

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You have given us a peek into your mind. That is a nice rhyme change you did there in the last line. Unexpected. Your heart. Is just fine and the superficial scars will soon heal. And though you may think you have martian traits...the venus in your. Constellation eventually wins. You still are alive though the world at times may feel devoid of life....and your eyes...well they could sleep awhile and be kept safe from alien observers.

[Sujash I. Purna]

very concise but a bit abrupt but nice anyway :)

[Rose Tyler]

Music is the saviour to some, and only when you walk in another person's shoes will you actually discover what life's like from a different perspective.