Changed your ways

Changed your ways

A Poem by ErinLovesYou<3

Its like a dream

Not something you'd want to redeem

Once all tethered

Now its a bit weathered

 

No longer broken

Maybe a bit too open

We don't want you to fall

So please try not to crawl

 

This may be a bit too much

But I'm giving you my all

Hoping you won't fall

Praying that you won't crawl

 

But I have faith

And this is how it will stay

 

So don't let me down

Cause you don't wanna see me frown

So just go on and wear your crown


Written on August 16, 2010 *(8-16-10)*

© 2011 ErinLovesYou<3


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Hmmm...interesting. I like the change in the character the voice is talking about.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice rhyming work here :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Bow to your Queen and I will crown your head
'Cause I can make you every inch a King
Before I do tell me, What's in it for me?"
-Dirty work by Halestorm

That's what popped into mind when I read this. Great write xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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