On&On

I lay here with my hands in my hair
Another bottle O' beer

The rain falls on the window panes
Just another one of those god damn days

The hurt from my heart is in my veins
People I lost, people I loved
Promised always
Where are you these days

Are you hiding in the shadows as
As I step silently through this broken land

And my days go on
While my heart moves on

Written on: June 20,2010 *(6-20-10)*

Reviews

[Kestrova]

I agree, this had a very nice flow, as subtle as it may be. I really liked this piece and especially the second and third stanzas.

[Rose Tyler]

This flowed well, and I loved the word choice.