Tons O Fun

Romantic guy supped to meet me. Sat waiting for a him for hours. Finally took bus home. He deserved a bigger woman than me.

There's a great big wall

behind your school

It doesn't hide a lagoon

it's a swimming pool

And this ain't no island

and you ain't for real

No one can help me

with the way I feel

You're were such a child

acting like a little weenie

but now your're a real pro and

do a great Houdini

This ain't no magic carpet

it's the city bus

and there's tons of Brendas

but there is no us

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

"your're real a pro and" to "you're a real pro and"

Fun piece for me at the expense of your unrealized love interest. Keep that kind to the curb and skip the boys and even it you have to wait a while, find a man. A man that respects you and treats you right. You don't need to waste you time on dirt bags. Nicely done in an angry way. Peace out.

[David Scott]

A few typos to fix but I felt the slighting of your emotions. He doesn't deserve you...