short story:the sunflowerA Story by portuguese_doggothis is just a prototype of the first part of this little short story I am trying to make but I would really appreciate some criticism
It was a time before civilization
in a time of silence and tranquillity, in a region never touched by Man there was a vast plain of land that extended endlessly with luxurious flowers and wonderous animals the land shinning with the bright colours of life as if it was the garden of Eden itself but in the midst of such a spectacle, there was a mountain a humongous, bulbous rock that towered over the land and like a needle pierced the purity of the bright blue sky strapped bare naked by the ruthless winds for not even snow would cover the ugliness of the charcoal rocks.
but it was there in the repulsive summit of that mountain that a sunflower bloomed. © 2018 portuguese_doggoAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorportuguese_doggolisbon , PortugalAboutI am a 17 year old, I live in portugal like my name states and english is not my firt language so sorry for any mistakes I might makes .I am not aspiting to be a writer of anything like that I just wa.. more.. |