wisp

wisp

A Poem by porkchops

I don't see,
I don't hear, 
I don't speak.... 

I close down to float within my own mind, 
I become a wisp, a shadowy veil of thought,
but in this form I find a world,
one without any barriers,
with out discrimination as all are the same, 

We become sexless,
colorless,
just a wisps of shadows that flow,
in and round each other,
that slowly form together as one mass to pray for the rising sun...

© 2012 porkchops


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You interpret this nicely in the lines...as you transform in the verse as just a figment of vapor and take form and explain to us the feeling of a whole new concept of mind and body in a state of wonder...

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porkchops
porkchops

Telford, Shropshire, United Kingdom



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I am a male and at present live in the U.K. I have not had a great education and have suffered with dyslexia all my life. I have been reluctant to share with others what I write for fear of my awful g.. more..

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