Rain

I can feel it coming
I can smell it in the air
All I can do is wait
Finally I feel a drop
It hits my cheek
Slowly more start to fall
I stretch out my arms
And look towards the sky
I close my eyes and wait
It begins to pour
The rain is finally here
Each drop that hits me
Takes away a bit of the hurt
Slowly washing the pain away
My heart begins to heal
My spirit starts to revive
I begin to feel cleansed
Fresh and renewed

Reviews

[CindyLu]

i love the smell of rain, and the feel of it fresh on my skin. i'd take a dance in the rain over a bath any day ^_^ if only it was as physically cleansing as it is mentally. beautiful write.

[Porcelain Lotus Flower]

Haha, yes! If only.

[CindyLu]

what the world could build off the premise of 'if only's... :)