Trembled Waters.

I don't have much to say but I promise to say it.

This spiral of control has completely lost me.

There are cracks in the grains of sand so we sit and wonder why.

Carvings of dismembered souls on the wall of Earth,

give it your mind and watch it work.

Kingdoms of foreign fields make for thrilling lullabies,

tongues become tangled in razor-sharp lies.

Do not force the tears to stop,

the flow is worse without being in your arms.

It will never be over.

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Kingdoms of foreign fields make for thrilling lullabies,
tongues become tangled in razor-sharp lies.
Do not force the tears to stop,

YES! This is amazing I know these feelings.
I like these lines here they say so much.
Wonderfully expressed emotions.