In your feel !!

Within d traces of moonlight
Within d sunset of early night
I fall again ,
Breathing your rhythm ,
To feel you within my cells ..

Within flashes of my heart ,
Within d shadows of my dark ,
I fall again ,
Breathing your rhythm ,
To live me within your shells ..

With the shadow of your soul ,
Marrying with insensitive leaflets ;
With blurring vision to d world
I fall again ..
Breathing you !!

Within seconds of my day
With fractions of my night ,
With elagance of your love ,
I fall again ,
Feeling you in my breath ,
Breathing you in my feel !!

Reviews

[lightsong]

That's so very lovely, a poem of love which doesn't sound like all the other poems about love, You dragged me at once from Your first words, You have a talent and I see here great thoughts which rise with the mind and spirit, a deeply spiritual value, reminded me of how I write, very well written my dear, be proud of Your self here, specially that You've said You are young.

just a question my dear the "d" letter is it for rapping?

[Pooja Chintamani]

d means * the as we pronounce .. I'm very lucky to get you as mentor on this platform. Otherwise I do not belong to any writing background or literature .your words are means a lot for me .I will make you sure by improving my ink .thank you again for dropping your seconds over my letters .light💕✍️

[lightsong]

my dear, don't ever worry about having no writing background or literature, I too have none, believe me or not! nor English is my first language.

I got that "d" means "the", I thought You used "d" for a rapping rhythm. Your poem here touched me in a special way because as I've said it gave me the feeling of how I write sometime, You are warmly welcome keep Your ink flowing.

[lightsong]

my dear, don't ever worry about having no writing background or literature, I too have none, believe me or not! nor English is my first language.

I got that "d" means "the", I thought You used "d" for a rapping rhythm. Your poem here touched me in a special way because as I've said it gave me the feeling of how I write sometime, You are warmly welcome keep Your ink flowing.