wedlock day!

Its about my friend wishing his wife happy wedlock day also her birthday.First time i have writtten on such when topic is specified otherwise verse are random.

Turning to the back pages of our life,
still I remember the day, first few seconds u cracked my mind!
How wonderful the dream came true when my last name is yours I find!!

When random hearts found each other,
Wedding bells rang without any bother!!
How beautiful those passed few hour,
When we Knotted life of love shower!

Turning today when still I remind,
Your First look and love string struck in my mind!!
Even we passed million seconds,
the day of our wedlock I love to find!!

The photocopies and pictures,
the theatre screen and gifts,
the teddies and those text,
Whole relation is young I find,
When the wedlock day struck in my mind!!

Still the wishes are too many,
and there is a day of witness of our love is coming,

The birth of new born and first cry to hear,
You will be mother and I will cheer!!

On this special day as you are,
Thanking for being my wishing pole star!!
The day will come and go well soon,
But promises are same as done on wedding noon!!

Thank you to be there,
in every moment from the wedlock,
Wish your every dream to be mine,
in every year when your birthday knocks!!

Wishing a happiest birthday to love of my life
thanking your choice, signing as my wife!!!

Author's Note

Please ignore grammer.

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

Nice though through your poem, well expressed the reality of life . I like it

[Onlyme]

Joyously uplifting, wholesome and romantic. Made for each other love.

[Pooja Chintamani]

Thank you for your warm words ..

[Samuel]

The narration in the poem is beautiful. The joy could be felt by your words. It seemed that the verses were flowing like a brook in a picturesque backdrop.

[Pooja Chintamani]

Thank you so much .it's pleasure to share my words here in touch of deep writer's whirlpool ..

[¿]

I really get happy to read such happy writing...free verse, heartfelt words, love filled, and wishes and so more wrapped in it!! A very lovely letter, thanks for sharing☺!!

[Pooja Chintamani]

Thank you so much dear.

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Wc😊.....!!!