Words after last bye.

In the bottle of short letters..
Rolls of colorful texts..
I was living d same day
Wen you wrote d first pray..

In the bottle of short letters.
Alphabet of our favorite movies..
I was enjoying the same screen
When u wrote the battle I win..

In the bottle of short letters..
The lovely ribbon written dates we had..
I was wearing d same Hat..
Wen I wrote you are my reason to be glad..

In the bottle of short letters, ..
The chocolate dipped thumbprint I miss.
I was smiling my own.
Wen I wrote you are my hero to glitz..

In the bottle of short letters..
The days we caught together..
I was dreaming to be with you..
Wen you wrote the last bye rather..

Reviews

[Pooja Chintamani]

Thank you Jay it's nice to connect the Verse to feelings. Always being center of writing

[jay]

well, this one will be close to my heart.. it happened in my life... thank you writing the words that my heart struggled for years to express... rich in emotions..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sad ending..i guess the language in this fits the poem...even if it creates unease in this reader.
but i like the workings of your creative mind with your strong imagery and in your face delivery.
j.