Coffee and you

that cold coffee nd you..
Hard breaths of silence nd you..
Those conversations nd you..
that blushing faces nd you..

Everything in dat ambience..
The lost minds and beating hearts..
Each element of surrounding..
Those crushed ice and that lovely flasks..

Blowing dreams and your hands..
The words of love nd shining glass..
My whole is yours nd u r there..
Melting me and hard the flash..

Pair of chairs and millions of words.
My first wish and d smile u wear..
Coffee for chance nd love for once.
Your last wish and my shining tear.

Reviews

[jay]

the way you combine two elements of that meeting is out of this world. as one more person mentioned pair of chairs and millions of words is like a butterfly on a flower

[ElizaB]

I really really like this!

This line is my favourite:
Pair of chairs and millions of words

[lightsong]

There is an originality in Your style, feelings which are strong, the scene You've painted with a profound touch, that this scene gets larger to resemble the world, where Your love is every where... very lovely and lovingly the way You ended the poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the imagery...the text language throws me off, not a fan of it in poetry...

but the mood you create is strong, emotional and real...i think it would read even more strongly in all formal language...
j.