Bunny love

This story is about my rabbit and how he inspired me to do my dream job. I am planning to put it in chicken soup for the soul

                           

I want to tell a story of a wonderful pet who inspired me to become an animal trainer.

Taught me patience and is always there for me. This creature is my pet rabbit. He has floppy ears a cute stubby tail, brown and white fur and a fluffy body. His name is Sherey.  When I teach him to him to walk on his leash he showed me anger got me nowhere with him. He would be stubborn sometimes and not do anything that got me mad. When I was calm he would come to me most times. He is always there by listening me to my problems when my parents got mad at me or my friends. He never left my side. You can tell that he truly loves me. One time the cage was open for twenty four hours he never left and decides to move on. I may not always be there for him. I regret that. I also regret those times when I was as not nice to him five years ago. He still forgave me. Now day he is seven years old. Well trained rabbit that walks on his leash. Helps me with some yard work by pulling a sled with leaves in it. One time he made this girl with some mental problems happy when we where near the bookstore. The smile on that girls face was truly amazing. I will always remember the girls smile. I am going to truly miss him when his time comes.

Charlotte standley   

Reviews

[Kieta!]

Aww :) My brother's always wanted a bunny and now I know why :) Great job!! :) :)

[Charlie]

My tutor probaly going to help me with it but please point out the mistakes

[Julius Whimbird]

I can only say that you need to work on grammatical issues and incorporating figurative language.