dog island

all about dogs

there once was a dog called Lucy. she was a very beautiful dog. she had a mate called Tarin. they were madly in love. one day Lucy moved away. Tarin was very very sad. one day he ran away from home just to find her. his first stop was the falcons dessert. it was very dry. he went back home and gathered all his materials on his belly bag. he took his water . he took his hat. he took his food and lots of it. he took his chew toy. he took his bed to lay on. he took lots of things. matter of fact his abdominal was stronger than the strongest man in the world so he took more then 15 items. then he finally was satisfied with all that he had so he started on his way to the falcon dessert. he took lots of stops to drink water but he always had lots of waters left. After two hours he stopped to eat some dog food then took out his camp put his bed under it and slept for 30 minutes. when he woke up he was refreshed so he packed up and headed back on his way. He ran about for 5 hours stopping over hundreds of times to get water. AT the end of the falcon dessert he had nearly run out of water but had plenty of food so he went to an oasis and filled all his bottles and started back on his way. then his next quest was to go through the giant ocean. He saw a machine operated boat that ran on sea water so that was the boat he took. it was mighty hard for him because their were big waves and he was getting very wet. lucky thing he had bought his tent and tape and bed so he taped his water proof tent to the bottom of the lake and put his bed under the tent and he did not get wet. he had a little meal and drank some water and took a nap. It was very cold in the night. luckily he had brought his favorite cover that reminded him of home and he covered himself. he was as comfortable as a bug under a rug. in the morning  he chewed on his mint stick because his mouth tasted bad. He ate a meal and drank some water and still had plenty of water and food. he sprayed himself so he did not smell like sea salt. All of a sudden he hard a little yelp. he looked toward the yelp and saw a little puppy. he used his lifesaver and his rope that he had packed to reel the puppy in. the puppy was very wet so Tarin covered the puppy with a towel. He realized that the puppies name was Lusarin and that she was only 2 days old. Tarin cared for Lusarin as if she was his own. he fed the puppy and himself he gave the puppy water and himself. they played games together around the  boat like follow the leader. they sometimes stayed on islands and ate fruit they had lots of fun together. one day while they were heading to an island on the boat a shark attacked. darin threw Lusarin onto the island. he fought with all his might. the shark gobbled up his ear he fought and fought. the shark and Darin were both bleeding. Darin was unusully strong so he won the battle. he limped to the island. there he found his beautiful mate lucy. darin tried to leap with joy but all he could do was howl in pain. darin realized that lucy had some puppies all around her. he asked her where all the puppies had come from. she said that she had given birth to them. lusarin had been playing around  and got washed away by the waves. she said she wanted to go and find her but she had

 to watch the rest of the pups. thank God that Darin was their. i named lusarin after you and me. you have a jr named darin tyleak jr. then there is lucy tyleak. miranda. genesis , aaron issac and izlendemt. you name the last one. darin said i think i will name her starr. sahe has a scar the shape of a star. lucy treated darin,lusarin and stars scars with alcohol that darin had bought along. lucy had built a shelter and had lots of food and they still had the boat so sometimes the pups spent time together with their mommy and daddy who are darin and lucy to go fishing and play games. they were always happy because they were together. when the pups grew up they made new generations and lucy and darin lived for a long time and they had more and more pus because none of them were spayed. they oficially named the place dog island and all dogs lived in harmony all their life darin and lucy were the king and queen. this island is called atlantis in the human world.this is my story of dog island.

Author's Note

egnore grammar pucuation and spelling problems only question if you do not understand please

Reviews

[Trigorin]

You have a good story, I suppose, but check your grammar and spelling, and for the love of god, format this like a normal human being. In addition, make sure you avoid passivity and you might want to look into fleshing out your narrative a little more.