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a group of unanswered questions that are all differnt but connected

How do you find yourelf,

When you never knew you lost it?

How do you know where to look,

If you havent been anywhere?

How do you know when to give up?

When your energy is goe,

When you cant take no more,

When your eyes are blood shot red,

When your head is pounding at full force,

When you have no where else to fall?

How do you express yourself,

When you feel theres no right way?

How do you live, When you in prisoned in your own body and home,

When you have no privacy?

How do you love,

When you dont know how to love yourself,

Whn you cant love every waking moment of your life?

How do you push yourself everyday?

How do you live, in this caged place called life!

 

Author's Note

does this flow

Reviews

[CircusNerd]

the flow is fine, but i think something of bigger concern is grammar. i'm not a grammar nazi, but it may affect your rating if one of 'em came along and found the minor spelling errors in this piece. questioning yourself also forces the audience to think of answers too, if that's the point of this piece then you accomplished it. nice work!