TRAPPED

a poem about how life is when you feel trapped

its hard to live in a body everyday when you feel trapped

you feel like your looking out a window everyday but no one can ever see the real you

no one ever ask what you want and no one cares

but you close your blinds and you see yourself

its hard to breath when all you think of is no air, no air in your brain no air because your not living

its hard to smile when you have nothing to be happy for and you fear nothing

where every wakibng moment something good happens you find yourself sitting around waiting for the bad.

its hard to trust when everyone breaks your heart leavng fragnments of what you use to be

its hard to sleep when you cant close your blind because your trapped with no way out no way in and not a clue of how to move on

its easy to feel traped when your not living, it comes a time where you need to break the windows you hind behind and free yourself

Author's Note

ignore punctuation and capitilization

Reviews

[Catastrophe]

So where should I begin!? I've never been able to really say what I think through these reviews!!
( I know...sad)
Well...this is really sharp and powerful...personally it says a lot to me.
I feel trapped within myself...and this poem definitely speaks for a lot of people I'm sure.
I love how metaphorical it is.

"it comes a time where you need to break the windows you hind behind and free yourself"

I love that
great write...
keep it up

[Dillon Cotter]

i feel as if sometimes nobody knows who we are or our dreams...in fact it feels like people dont have the time of effort to care. this poem explains alot in meaning and percepteion. really well done !