waiting to exhail

a romantic poem about love

life without you is like waiting to exhail.

breathing but your breath is unreal

i eat but it dont fill the big gaping hole in my heart, a place where you once was

moving on is the hardest thing, well i thought, util i realized how far i lead this on and made it beacome

i lied, i lied about a million time always using the same three words i love you!

in truth i dont know what love is, im still trying to find myself in this big world that is slowly swollowing me up

i love you was just three words i thought could even make me start to feel that, when i never did, it never even got to i like you very much.

how can you fall in love with someone that makes you mad all the time, that your constently fighting with, that your always complaining about

how can you fall in love with a person who is just half of what you are or what you want to be, that you find out knows so much about you but you know not a thing about them.

how can you be yourself when your so afraid to loose the person and trying to be happy making them happy.

your exhausted by even the thought of trying.

its hard when you think about how much you want to be in love, but just cant fall.

waiting for you is like waiting to breath, live or even be happy

because in all real thought how can you fall when you never took the first step?

Author's Note

ignore spelling and punctuation please

Reviews

[Maggie waz here =p]

This is really good. Just like you said, it's romantic and about love.
I like it. Just one little, tiny, teeny problem.
You din't capitalize any thing. All of the I's were lower case.
Unless you ment for it to be that way. If so, just forget what I said.
No biggie if you messed up.
This is a great poem, good job!