Breaking Point

I'm at my breaking point

let the rain crash down on me

and was away my misery

 

I'm at my breaking point

Feel the angry

as it rumbles through me

 

I'm at my breaking point

the light is trying to shine through

but the gray is over taking it

 

I'm at my breaking point

come down from the sky

and save me from my deepest lie

 

 

Reviews

[misha]

This is a really great poem. It is beautiful in its simplicity. There is only one thing I noticed. When you said "Feel the angry" I think you meant to put "feel the anger" Other than that it is really good.

[Harmonica winds]

Such a powerful write and so emotional. So well written, like this!

[joshua deathdealer]

Emo for sure.. lol.. I love it.

[Grace Catherine C.]

If i knew the lyrics to "I'm an Emo Kid" I would sooo start singing them right now. Lol good job.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A powerful write, a great poem :)