Afraid to Fall

why i hate falling

You never know when it will happen

Whether it's falling to the ground

Or falling in an endless pit of mistakes

It can be quick

It can seem like a lifetime

That part doesn't scare me

What scares me the most is

What if I fall, hard

And there's no one to help me up

I'll be all alone not knowing the out come

That's why I'm

Afraid to Fall

Author's Note

My brother and i were messing around outside when he grabbed my arm and tried to trip me i started to freak out and begged him not to let me hit the ground then he asked me, "Why are you so afraid of falling?" that is what this poem is about

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

I love this its emotional and had my attention the whole time. I'm slightly afraid of falling emotionally. I kind of got used to the physical falling because I'm a clutz xD Excellent poem!

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Wow. Excellent penning. I love the simplicity of the strong and undisguised emotion.

[Dearantlers]

I like it. I feel the same way sometimes. It's short and simple, but means a lot. Very well written!

[Kelly M.]

I like this poem. :) I love how your writing is simple, but true. Great write! It's neat where you can get your inspiration from... like PyroKitty said. :P

[PyroKitty24]

It's funny where you can get your inspiration from! Very nice and well written~