Afraid to Fall

why i hate falling

You never know when it will happen

Whether it's falling to the ground

Or falling in an endless pit of mistakes

It can be quick

It can seem like a lifetime

That part doesn't scare me

What scares me the most is

What if I fall, hard

And there's no one to help me up

I'll be all alone not knowing the out come

That's why I'm

Afraid to Fall

Author's Note

My brother and i were messing around outside when he grabbed my arm and tried to trip me i started to freak out and begged him not to let me hit the ground then he asked me, "Why are you so afraid of falling?" that is what this poem is about

Reviews

[alexlessah]

very good write

[Judas Hammer]

nice write, good piece

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

honest drops of emotion from the heart~

[Nishant Gupta]

don't be afraid we are there everytime with you , and if not then GOD is always there, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[Spookers]

I like it. Your author's not made me laugh. Good job

[what-the-frick]

I love the double meaning in this poem! I've fallen into endless pits of mistakes before ...

[KAREN]

Your poem is deep and makes you think, because you can fall many different ways.

[misha]

Great job on this poem. Perfect way of conveying your feelings.

[Hello, Goodbye]

good job on placing those feelings/event into a poetic piece..

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Poem with many layers that beautifies it short length :)