One day

One day

A Poem by Julie Beth
"

my life plan that will never come true

"

One day

I will save up my money

and build a HUGE freezer in my backyard

It will be perfect for him

 

One day

after I build my freezer

I will buy a baby polar bear

he will sleep in the freezer at night

and spend time with me during the day

 

One day

I will teach my polar bear to be nice

as I cuddle with him

while I watch TV.

 

One day

he will get too big for my freezer

and he won't be able to cuddle with me

because he will crush me

 

One day

I will realize

I can't have a polar bear

because it's not good for him

to be held captive

 

One day

is far away

 

Today

I look at all the polar bears

I have in my room and think

damn I want a real polar bear

© 2011 Julie Beth


Author's Note

Julie Beth
...i really want that polar bear

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I like this poem. It's funny and super relatable. I'm exactly like this except I really want a penguin. Great job.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


I Love this!! I love Polar bears too they are one of my favorite animals (Right after pandas). They are so white and amazing and I just love em. Great poem and its hilarious! Great job!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


That made me laugh! I loved the poem. It's so sweet, and I can tell that you really want one. I think it would be really cool to have one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOL how amusing~ I adored this poem. It's so cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this reminds me of a song, maybe cuz I am dumb but look up

Everlast- I will buy you a new life

90/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


A wonderful fun, cute write. Enjoyed it:)

Yas

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem was soo sweet and cute. Great write!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol i know you do Julie i know you do. cute little poem. i hope you can get a polar bear!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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