Better Than Before

Better Than Before

A Poem by Julie Beth
"

i'm not really sure if its good

"

She stands on the sandy shore

waves gently crash over the rocks

the moon is high

but the tide is low

mountains are visible

in the moon's distant light 

 

She looks up to the sky

on this starless night

wishing he could see

what she could

 

A smile crosses her face

knowing that

where he is now

is better than

where he was

before

© 2011 Julie Beth


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Aw, I think it's sweet Julie.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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