In Her World

this is one of my favorite poems i wrote

In her world

she stands on the iceberg

as it floats

on the calm water

when she looks up

she sees a full moon

along with the northern lights

in the Winter

 

In her world

she sits in a field

surrounded by beautiful flowers

that never die

when she looks around

she sees beautiful green trees

along with the perfect shade of green grass

in the Spring

 

In her world

she lays down on the beach alone,

on sand that is neither hot nor cold

comforted by the sound and smell

when she looks forward

she sees the calm waves crashing on the shore

in the Summer

 

In her world

she walks on an empty path

as she looks around

she sees different colored leaves

blowing gently in the air

along with some naked trees

in Autumn

 

In her world

she will find

peace, love, happiness, and sanity

 

In her world

she will escape

the sadness,

the madness,

and be herself

 

Though she may

not live forever

on Earth,

 

In her world

she will never die...

 

Reviews

[Chelsea]

This was a really great poem. I love all the scenarios you came up with, each unique and equally gripping! They had lovely descriptions, I especially loved the one about the Northern Lights. Where I live I get to see the Northern lights and let me tell you they are spectacular! lol
I think this poem had a lot more to it! This "world" maybe was it her imagination, or where she dreams she really was?
Hmm, a very thought provoking poetry! I am going to subscribe to you!

[Sujash I. Purna]

"a full moon along with the northern lights"

very beautiful imagery! a beautiful poem!

[Kelly M.]

This was really beautiful! I loved how you put all different seasons here and your senses. I especially loved the end where you said she could escape and have sanity. Beautiful imaginary! Beautiful poem! :)

[Hatchling]

Beautiful!

[Tina Kline]

This is very beautiful. A lovely and peaceful world of the polar bear. I like this, great job on this poem.

[Sarah E. Pearson]

i love it julie

[A]

It's peaceful and cozy!
full of deep meanings behind the words.
I liked the transition throughout the poem, it's impressive.
well-done.

[Jesse Jacques]

i loved this poem! I think that you did a fantastic job. I wish I could see the Northern Lights.

[KAREN]

Excellent write! I felt at peace when I was reading!

[TheFemininePad]

This is a beautiful and amazing poem. You write very well for your age Julie. The quality of the poem is very superb. I was really dazzled by your writing here. The imagery draw me straight in, and it didn't let let go. It was very moving, and very special. I don't see how I would improve upon this poem.

[Grace Catherine C.]

That's beautiful Julie, you did an amazingly good job, I loved it.