Another Stupid Love Poem

the title explains it all

i could tell you

you make me smile

i could tell you

you make me laugh

i could tell you

your my best friend

but you already knew that

i could tell you

your one of the very few people

who puts up with my polar bear obsession

that always makes you laugh

i could tell you

the music you listen to is so old

it makes me giggle

i could tell you

all of this

makes me realize that maybe

i want to be more than friends

i could tell you

but i wont

because that would just make this

another stupid love poem

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: I love repetition, especially if it's a single phrase, which you use quite well in this poem. It's a very well balanced poem, following a structure of repeated line, new line, repeated line, etc.

Cons: The only thing that could be done to make this better is take out "this" in the line "this but i wont." It's an un-needed word that, in my opinion, slightly stunts the ending.

Overall: Very good poem, I especially enjoy how it ends. Good job :)

[WordsAndVoices]

' because that would make this, another stupid love poem'
I loved that, it was great and I could actually feel the same feelings as you. It's a really good poem, and I loved how it ended. Keep this up!!

[Alexa Tasch]

aw cute juju. i loved it

[Short.Nerd]

Haha I absolutely love it! Great job (:

[KAREN]

I love the flow of this, and the name fits it! Love the ending too! Excellent job!!!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Aaaww :) And I agree with GamingGal :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

I know who this is about! Far from stupid Julie, good job.