Are We Sure Its Real

i dont really know i also wrote this in history maybe its stupid but i think about this alot

did you ever wonder

about this life

maybe its not real

maybe its all a dream

we could be aliens

or the aliens lab rats

its insane

the thought of how

there was once nothing

on earth

its mind blowing

the thought of how

earth came to be

its crazy

the thought of how

we just came to earth

how is it possible

that there was once

no life on this planet

now theres us how

are we sure its real

Author's Note

yeah kinda stupid but i think about it alot tell me if its good or bad please

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

I agree with what Dream Slave wrote. This made me think a lot. Considering all the variables one would need for a planet where life can survive, it is considered almost astronomical that it would happen. Yet here we are as a testament that despite all the odds we are here. So there has to be other life out there. The odds are not that great, but it has to be possible. Thank you for the message you are trying to convey to your reader about this.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You do think so deeply for someone so young. And you're history lessons must be inspiring they tend to bring out some top work from you:)

Yas

[KAREN]

I thinks it's a good random poem! Makes you think! But if you believe inGod you know how earth came to be! Excellent write!

[Hello, Goodbye]

It certainly something that I think all humans ponder on... Consciousness and dreams are my personal obsessions, so I have certainly pondered about what is real, what is authentic..

[Grace Catherine C.]

I'll admit I've had similiar thoughts, scary isn't it? Anyways, good poem.

[Dream Slave]

Very good thought provoking piece. It is not stupid at all, from that same concept you are talking about have come great picture films. The Matrix being the most recognized of them, where we are nothing but batteries to computers and robots. I give you two thumbs up for this because in all reality, I would have to borrow some.

[Tony]

"Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream?"
-Edgar Allan Poe

Thought provoking poem-- makes you wonder doesn't it.