Never Ending Road

wrote this in history class might not be all that good

where am i going

when will it end

i'm on a road

that twists and bends

my bodies shaking

out here in the cold

trying to figure out

what my life beholds

i dont know

where to go

i only know

what im told

im bound to this

never ending road

Author's Note

tell me what you think please

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw, Julie I really like this one!

[TheFemininePad]

You have a good grasp on writing poems. This was was worded very well. I can't picture where I would improve upon it. You did a great job writing this. The structure is very unique, and it flows very naturally. Fantastic Job!

[Jesse Jacques]

pretty good.

[Karli]

it's great! i write stuff in school all the time, and it sucks, but this is really good! :)