Invisible Pain

my toe hurt and i was bored so i made this up

my toes hurt

i dont know

what to do

could someone please

give me a clue

its been hurting

for so long

and i dont know

whats wrong

i kinda feel like singing a song

 

 

 

Author's Note

didnt know what to do for the last line so yeah its bad its not suppose 2 be good so

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

Well, you definitely have good rhyming here... and guess what I do when my toes hurt? I learned this from my Dad, who's a chiropractor. You have to yank all your toes forward and wait until they crack. And if they don't crack that means they're good... Silly, isn't it? But, believe me, it works! And keep writing!

[Alexa Tasch]

lol it is cute and funny! i can't really help you with the pain cuz my ankel has been hurting and i don't know what to do either so i am focused on that right now. sorry my love!

love-alexa

[KAREN]

Very cute though!