Cry

Sometimes its good to cry

cry for being kicked down

cry for being pushed around

cry for the hurt

cry for the dead

cry for the homeless

cry for the soldiers

cry for the people you lost

cry for the people you will lose

cry for the friend your losing

cry for the world

you shouldnt give up on the dying

but you should start crying

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Nice message, love the structure:)

[Short.Nerd]

Wow. this is amazing! I absolutely love it. You use the word cry perfectly. Nice job

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I love Your repetition of the word cry...it emphasizes Your meaning....just let the tears out...

[AIMEE]

its good to cry, but you need to learn to pick yourself up again.

[Alexa Tasch]

it is good to cry just like it is good to read your poetry cuz it rocks!

[Maddie]

aw :( very good sad

[penchantpoet]

lacrimae vita! THe tears of life indeed. Found the inspiration behind it illuminating - but the repitition a little excessive. Your caption of "sometimes it's good to cry" is true, but perhaps too much is not too good?
Keep up the efforts!
PP

[chillz]

"you shouldn't give up on the dying
but you should start crying" AMAZING